Preparing to launch, sparks flew from the engines ready for lift off. Holding on tight to my seat belt, sweat dripped from my fore head. Cutting through the sky a powerful fire bursted out of the rocket boosters. Shaking and shuddering while ears shattering. I knew this space adventure would be a bad idea. While sitting on my seat there was a big boom. I could feel butterflies flying around in my tummy. It was count down time 3,2,1 blast off. It was a scary adventure but I still had fun. I’m looking forward to our next space mission. Preparing to launch, sparks flew from the engines ready for lift off. Holding on tight to my seat belt, sweat dripped from my fore head. Cutting through the sky a powerful fire bursted out of the rocket boosters. Shaking and shuddering while ears shattering. I knew this space adventure would be a bad idea. While sitting on my seat there was a big boom. I could feel butterflies flying around in my tummy. It was count down time 3,2,1 blast off. It was a scary adventure but I still had fun. I’m looking forward to our next space mission.
Hello Aldora! Wow, what a great description of blast off! Your choice of words are great. It must have been such a great story that you put it on twice :) Good Job.
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ReplyDeleteThat was a very cool story and I like the way you use interesting words . Your stories a gone better then last term and I love your pictures
It must have been such a great story that you put it on twice :) Good Job. Aldora
Hi Aldora! My name is Katie and I am from the United States! All the way from Alabama, I was assigned in class to comment on your blog. What a cool story! You had me feeling like I was in the rocket with you! I loved how you created feeling, emotion, and used great verbs and adjectives to describe your experience. Keep up your writing! I think you will a great writer one day! :) Thanks again for blogging!
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