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Thursday, May 10, 2012

Swimming lessons


When we entered the pool, I could smell the chlorine coming straight to my nose. When I past the entrance I quietly tiptoed like a mouse to the showers. After I had a rinse I slid into the swimming pool, as I was getting in, I realised I was the first one to get in.

Waiting politely I, went under the water and came back up.
After a while the rest came and then we started. “Swim to the island and have 5 seconds rest then swim back” Shouted our Instructor, angrily.


“Straight arms behind your ears, off you go Annliz” said our instructor.  I was after Annliz, so I took a deep breath and took off like a rocket ship. As soon as I got to the end I was so tired I didn’t want swim again. “This reminds me about the time when we did cross country”.


I love swimming because it exercises my legs, and my body. I hope I will be a great swimmer like the swimmers on tv.
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3 comments:

  1. JosephineMay 15, 2012 at 1:55 PM

    Wow Aldora,

    What an amazing recount you have written it shows amazing punctuation and shows amazent of qaulity giving! you have shown proud work for your teacher!

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  2. IronMay 16, 2012 at 10:14 AM

    Wow Aldora,

    I love the picture that you put on your blog.
    I like how you typed Swimming is fun. I like swimming too.
    What group were you in for swimming?
    I think your a very good swimmer Aldora?
    Love your story too.

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  3. JordnneMay 18, 2012 at 10:43 AM

    Hi Aldora,

    Wow you do really like swimming.
    I don't.
    But I use to go swimming lesson but then I quit.
    Because I didn't like it.
    Anyways why am i talking about me.

    NICE JOB ALDORA!!!! KEEP IT UP!!!

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