Round the Bays

On a hot sunny day me my mum and my brother went to round the bays. . It was on the 17Th of march on Sunday. We parked our car at mission bay and went on the bus to the city because the roads were closed. When we got to the city, there were only five more minutes until we start. I was really exited. When we started there were heaps of people there. Do you know how much people came? There were 70 thousand people that came. I was moaning when we just past the start line. My mum was so annoyed at me. When we got to the finish line I shouted " finally ".

At the finish line there were free chocolate. I was proud of myself because I made it to the finish line.

Acrostic poem

Remember to go around the outside.
Everyone wears their uniform with pride.
Strive to succeed and you will be a champion.
Purua to potae so you don’t get sun burn.
Every time we cross the road we stop think and do.
Chuck it in the bin and you will succeed.
Talk about it when you are unhappy.